例1
Some students like to live off campus, like renting an apartment; while others prefer living on campus, like living in dormitories. Which do you prefer and why? Include details and examples    
T---Topic:               off  campus rent an apartment
S---Supporting ideas      won’t bother others
ü       music loud,
ü        snore
privacy
ü       books, movies etc
T---transitions         First, because, Also, Finally     
Sample Answer:
“Some students like to live off campus, like renting an apartment to live in ; while others prefer living on campus, like in the dormitories.
Choose a position
      Personally speaking, I prefer living off campus like rent an apartment. First, because I am really crazy about listening to music loud, so I don’t want to bother others. And also, I snore very heavily at night when I am sleeping. You see, a person like me has no choice but to live off campus. Second, I want to have my own privacy. I can’t imagine that 5 or 6 people stick together. I don’t want my roommates to know whom I am calling , dating; what books I am reading or what movies I am watching. I would rather die if I have to live on campus”
T:        on campus
S:         share experience
ü                                                                                                             campus life , classmates, teachers
           Convenient
ü                                                                                                                     near to teaching building&dinning hall  5 'minutes
            safer             
T:         First, because, Also, Finally     
 
例2
Some people prefer having meals at Chinese restaurants, but some others prefer American-style fast food like KFC and McDonald’s. Which do you prefer and explain why.
T– Topic           American
S– Supporting    fast service
     idea             Am 30 chi 1hr
                       tastes good
                       French fries hamberg
                       Sign of fashion
                      KFC ,mac
                       
T—Transition    First, because, Also, finally

“I think American style fast food would be better. First, because of its fast service, I can save a lot of time. For example, If I have fast food, it only takes about 30 minutes, while if I have Chinese food, it will be an hour ” Another reason is that it tastes good. French fries and Hamburg are my favorite. Finally, eating fast food is a sign of fashion. You see, How can you be fashionable without having fast food in KFC or McDonald’s 
Chinese food
T– Topic            Chinese
S– Supporting            nutritious
     idea             nutrition
                       a variety of choices
                       Sichuan  ants climbing trees
                        Chinese food culture
                        Interesting food’s names
T—Transition    First, because, Also, finally

     “I think Chinese food would be better. Firstly, they are nutritious which have a lot of body-building nutrition and vitamin we really need. Also, there is a large variety of choices , like, if you like spicy food, you can choose “sichuan” style restaurant. By the way, my favorite Sichuan dish is “ants climbing tree.” Finally, you can know somethin’ about Chinese food culture by going to Chinese restaurants. Some dishes’ names are truly interesting, like “Dragon flitting across sea” ”