英语专八写作辅导:一个公式三个原则(2)

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  示例2:I entered the room saw mother sit there wait for me come back.

  分析:这里有5个动词,都没有标记逻辑关系,错误!通过分析,我们看到:entered和saw可以并列,因为它们拥有共同的1(I);sit和wait可以并列,因为它们拥有共同的1(mother),但这两组动词之间就不能再并列了,因为无法这么做。这就意味着:这句话里的动词有的可以并列,而有的不可以。

  示例3:I opened the bag took out some paper and a pen, sat down started take notes.

  分析:opened,took out,sat down,started这四个动词拥有共同的1(I),而且都是1直接行使或发出的动作,所以,可以采取并列关系;但take因为有个过渡层,因此并列处理不合适。

  2.从属关系示例

  示例1:I sat down beside her said nothing.

  分析:动词关系混乱,假如想确保said,则需要牺牲后面,如:

  I sat down beside her, saying nothing.

  假如确保后面,则牺牲前面:

  Sitting down beside her, I said nothing.

  示例2:To quit smoking, I eat candies.

  一个句子一个句号原则

  理论上讲,一个句子一个句号,但是,实际中会有几个甚至多个句子摆放在一起共享一个句号。此时应该怎么办呢?

  答案很简单:标记清楚这些句子间的逻辑关系。有两种:

  1.并列关系示例

  示例1:I sat down beside her. I said nothing.

  变为:I sat down beside her and I said nothing.

  示例2:He asked me a question. I answered him.

  变为:He asked me a question and I answered him.

  2.从属关系

  1)运用各类从句,形成主从符合句,包括:

  状语从句

  宾语从句

  定语从句

  主语从句

  同位语从句

  2)运用非谓语动词类进行从属方式的处理,包括:

  动词的ing形式

  动词的过去分词形式

  动词不定式形式

  从属关系示例(以状语从句为例)

  示例1:When he asked me a question, I answered him.

  示例2:I was so angry that I beat him up!

  示例3:If you ask me ‘why’, I will answer ‘because’!

  示例4:Since you are not feeling well, just lie down and take a good rest.

  示例5:Although I have tried my best, I can’t win her heart.

  示例6:Wherever I am, I will be thinking of you.

  示例7:I went out very early in the morning so that I could avoid the rush hour traffic

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