英语专八改错突击练习(6)

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  Exercise is one of the few factors with a positive role in long-term maintenance of body weight. Unfortunately,
  that message has not gotten through to the average American, that would rather try switching to __1__
  "light" beer and low-calorie bread than increase physical exertion. The Centers for Disease Control, for example,
  found that fewer than one-fourth of overweight adults were trying to shed __2__
  pounds said they were combining exercise with their diet.
  In rejecting exercise, some people may be discouraged too much by calorie-expending charts; __3__
  for example, one would have to briskly walk three miles just to work the 275 calories in one __4__
  delicious Danish pastry. Even exercise professionals concede half a point here.
  "Exercise in itself is a very tough way to lose weight," says York Onnen, __5__ 
  the program director of the President's Council on Physical Fitness and Sports. __6__
  Therefore, exercise's supporting role in weight reduction is vital. __7__
  A study at the Boston University Medical Center of overweight police officers and other public
  employees confirmed that those who diet without exercise regained almost all their old weight, __8__
  while those who worked exercise into their daily routine maintained their new weight.
  If you decide to start walking one mile a day, the added exercise could burn
  an extra 100 calories daily.In a year's time, assumed no increase in __9__
  food taken, you could lose ten pounds. By increasing the distance of your walks gradually __10__ 
  and making other dietary adjustments,you may lose even more weight.

  答案:1.that--who.that从句修饰的是the average American,而且它是一个非限定性定语从句,而that无法引导一个非限定性定语从句,所以应把that改为who。
  2.adults^--who.found后接的从句中主要的动词应该是said,而不是try to shed pounds,所以应该在were前面加上who构成定语从句修饰overweight adults。
  3.expending--expenditure.由于caloric是形容词,表示“属于或者关于卡的”,它后面不能接动词的-ing形式,而且expending和charts的关系也不成立,所以应该改为名词expenditure。
  4.work^--off.work off有消耗之意,符合文义。
  5.in--by(直接把in 去掉也可以吧?).in itself 表示“本身,本质上”,而我们都知道锻炼是一减肥的好方法,只是不能仅靠锻炼,还需配之以适当的饮食控制,所以应该把in itself换成by itself,表示“单独”。
  6.the(program)--/.在用作同位语表示独一无二的职位的名词之前,通常用零冠词。
  7.Therefore--Still/Neverthless.根据上下文,这里要表达的关系是让步,不是因果。
  8.diet--dieted.这里叙述的是过去的一项研究。
  9.assumed--assuming.assume和you的关系应是主动的,所以应改为assuming。
  10.taken--intake.take in 表示“摄入,吸收”,它的名词形式不是take in,而是 intake

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