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　　There is no denying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic in china today whether lucky numbers bring good luck. Some time ago, a piece of news say that lucky numbers bring good luck. To this issue people’s attitudes differ sharply. Some people may claim that lucky numbers really bring good luck. Others, however, may think otherwise.

　　In my opinion, I believe that lucky numbers can never bring good luck to a person. In the first place, the numbers is only a normal number and it doesn’t make any sense. Secondly, a good lucy is a thing and it comes from person’s efforts. If you don’t work hard, you don’t have a good opportunity. Last but not least, our furtune is in our own hands.

　　To sum up, lucky number should not be bring good luck. Anyway, lucky numbers is a desire for person. To acquire great success, you must work hard. So we always remember that no pains,no gains.

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　　文章基本涵盖了内容要点，但是在第一段中题目只要求你表述认为数字和好运有关的观点，你写的不同的人有不同 的观点，似乎是多余的。

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