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　　Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?

　　When it comes to “lucky numbers bring good luck”, people’s opinions vary from person to person, from place to place and from time to time. Some people argue that lucky numbers bring a positive influence on luck while other people maintain that lucky numbers can not bring good luck. In my view, I think numbers have no relation with luck.

　　A considerable number of examples can be found to prove that numbers have no relation with luck. To take Yang who is enough lucky to gain the five million RMB several days ago in china as a typical example, he used to buy a lottery ticket which number is 8888 or 6666, and the result was that he didn’t have any prize. However, he chose the number 4444 last time and gained the first prize. It is apparent that numbers have no relation with luck. Therefore, we should not depend on lucky numbers.

　　From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that numbers have no relation with luck. In addition, it is also desirable that we should take some effective measures to attain good luck. Only in this we can we lucky.

　　名师点评：8—9分

　　文章结构比较合理，但是内容欠充实，尤其是第二段论证自己的观点时例子很肤浅，不足以说明自己的观点。

　　题目要求第一段是表述有些人认为数字和好运有联系，而你写的是不同的人有不同的观点，似乎不太符合题意，需要改动。今后复习中要多看看范文。

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