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Facebook users risk psychological damage spying on ex lovers

　　As many as half of Face book users arerisking psychologicaldamage from using the site to spyon ex lovers, according to new research.
　　Two of the most cited reasons foraccessing Face book are to keep in touch with others and to surreptitiously monitor them - with between a third and half of users using it to check up on ex-partners.
　　With close to a billionusers, it means hundreds of millions may befinding it more difficult to get over a broken romance.
　　Psychologist Dr Tara Marshall said in the past, such spying and keeping tabs with what your ex was up to waschallenging.
　　You could try and pry information from his orher friends, telephone, or drop by their place, butit was usuallyunlikely you would turn up much useful information.
　　This made it easy for people to distancethemselves from the relationship and move on - an emotionally healthybreakup.
　　But as long as you remain 'friends' with your ex on Facebook, they are now able to keep up witheverything you are doing.
　　While satisfyinga certain curiosity factor, it seems likely that it would make it far more difficult to actually emotionally distance yourselffrom your past relationship.
　　In a survey of 464 participants,most of whom were undergraduate students, she found people who remain Face bookfriends with an ex-partner will experience poorer breakup adjustment andpersonal growth relative to those who do not.
　　The findings suggest continued online exposure to an ex-romantic partner may inhibit post-breakup recovery.
　　Notably, frequent monitoring of anex-partner's Face book page and list of friends was associated with greaterdistress.
　　Dr Brenda Wiederhold, editor of Cyberpsychology, Behavior and Social Networking which published the research, added:"This study sees again virtual life mirroring real life.
　　"Just as real life contact withex-partners may inhibit growth, healing, and well-being, so may virtualcontact."

（本文摘自China Daily）

　　这篇文章报道了根据一项最新研究，有多达半数的Face book用户使用该网站查看前情人的消息，这可能导致使用者的心理受创，让我们一起来看一下其中有哪些内容可以帮助我们应对雅思大作文。
　　首先，专家分析认为，这篇文章中使用了论证力比较强的引用论证方法，使文章非常有说服力。在这些引证中，作者通过引用研究的内容和结果，及专家的评论使自己的观点更加有说服力。同时，也运用举例子做了充分的例证。很多同学常常困惑如何才能使文章做到有理有据，引用和举例就是其中非常好用的一种方法，可以运用到雅思大作文中。
　　我们来看一道雅思大作文的真题。
　　The development of technology changes the way people connectwith each other.
　　In which ways does the development of technology change thetypes of relationships among people?
　　Does it have positive or negative effects on the relationships?
　　我们可以将报道中的论证方法运用此题目中：
　　引用：
　　·As many as half ofFace book users are risking psychological damage from using the site to spy on ex lovers, according to new research.
　　根据一项最新研究，有多达半数的Face book用户使用该网站查看前情人的消息，这可能导致使用者的心理受创。
　　句中的according to a newresearch这个引用句型
　　同样的句型还有：
　　According to the latest survey done by agroup of researchers,
　　The investigation shows that
　　* The findings suggest continued online exposure to anex-romantic partner may inhibit post-breakup recovery.
　　研究结果显示，在网上持续接触前任的信息可能有阻分手后的恢复。
　　* Psychologist Dr Tara Marshall said inthe past, such spying and keeping tabs with what your ex was up to waschallenging. You could try and pry information from his or her friends,telephone, or drop by their place, but it was usually unlikely you would turnupmuch useful information.
　　 心理学家塔拉-马歇尔博士说，过去，像是暗中监视或者密切注意前情人这种事很难办到。过去，你可以试着通过你或者前情人的朋友、电话，或者顺便拜访住处，探听前情人的消息，不过通常得不到太多有用的信息。
　　举例：
　　·In a survey of 464participants, most ofwhom were undergraduate students, she found people who remain Face book friendswith an ex-partner will experience poorer breakup adjustment and personalgrowth relative to those who do not.
　　马歇尔在调查中发现，与前情人还是Facebook好友的受访者，其分手后的调整过程与个人成长，不如不保持好友关系的受访者顺利。共有464名受访者参与调查，其中多数是大学生。
　　因果：
　　·Two of the most cited reasons for accessingFace book are to keep in touch with others and to surreptitiously monitor them - with between a third and half of users using it to check up on ex-partners.
　　用户使用Facebook网站的两大原因是与他人保持联系与暗中关注他们，其中有三分之一到一半的用户登录Facebook查看前情人的消息。
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　　headache　　 令人头痛的事
　　head-way　　 进展
　　conflict with… 　　与…相冲突
　　major cause 　　主要原因
　　be replaced by…　　 被…所取代
　　curb…　　 限制…
　　dilemma　　 进退两难
　　energy-saving 　　节能的
　　potential market 　　潜在市场
　　in view of　　 考虑到
　　provide conveniencefor … 　　为…提供便利
　　marketable products　　 畅销产品
　　jump into our sight　　 映入眼帘
　　high-tech products　　 高科技产品
　　fake and exaggeratedinformation　　虚假信息
　　be deceptive andmisleading　　 具有欺骗性和误导性
　　encourage somebody todo something 　　鼓励某人去做某事
　　be tempted into anunhealthy lifestyle　　 从而过上一种不健康的生活方式