2012年12月英语四六级写作技巧之平行结构

来源:大学英语四级    发布时间:2013-02-02    大学英语四级辅导视频    评论

    Parallel Structure
  平行结构
  相似的思想应用相似的形式表达出来。句子的成份相近,则也应以相似的形式出现。请注意以下标有"NO"的句子是不规范的。
  No: The school bus skidded, turned sideways, then comes to a stop.
  Yes: The school bus skidded, turned sideways, and came to a stop.
  (并列时态)
  No: I don’t know why I married someone who is miserly, sloppy and a bore.
  Yes: I don’t know why I married someone who is miserly, sloppy and boring.
  (形容词平行结构)
  No: In the wreck the circus lost a panda and elephant.
  Yes: In the wreck the circus lost a panda and an elephant.
  (不定冠词的平行结构)
  No: I debated whether I should give the beggar money or to offer him food.
  Yes: I debated whether to give the beggar money or to offer him food.
  (不定式的平行结构)
  No: They would lie on the battlefield for hours and sometimes days.
  Yes: They would lie on the battlefield for hours and sometimes for days.
  (介词平行结构)
  No: Michael’s vacuum cleaner squealed loudly, shook violently, and dust filled the air.
  Yes: Michael’s vacuum cleaner squealed loudly, shook violently, and filled the air with dust.
  (并列谓语)
  No: The mechanic explained the problem, method, and the tools that he was going to use.
  Yes: The mechanic explained the problem, method, and tools that he was going to use.
  (并列带有定冠词"the"的名词)
  No: He retired respected by his associates, admired by his friends, and his employees loved him.
  Yes: He retired respected by his associates, admired by his friends, and loved by his employees.
  (并列被动语态)
  No: As a young man he had been to Shanghai, fighting in the Anti-Japanese War, and following the Nationalist Party to Chongking.
  Yes: As a young man he had been to Shanghai, had fought in the Anti-Japanese War and had followed the Nationalist Party to Chongking.
  (并列过去完成时)
  No: Jane is pretty, with brown hair, and has a graceful manner.
  Yes: Jane is pretty, brown-haired, and graceful.
  (形容词平行结构)
  No: He left the city because of his lack of success in business, the departure of his friends and because his health deteriorated rapidly.
  Yes: He left the city because of his lack of success in business, the departure of his friends and his rapidly failing health.
   (作宾语的名词平行结构)
  No: They bought the house for location and affordability.
  Yes: They bought the house because of its location and its affordability.
   (并列名词;注意代词的所有格)
  No: Why did you make Xiao Zhang feel useless and as if he was unimportant?
  Yes: Why did you make Xiao Zhang feel useless and unimportant?

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